Femme Fatal Rough Cut

Audience feedback.
(Rough Cut)
We gathered some feedback from our rough cut preview and some pointers were given.
It was made apparent that there was a soundtrack needed in our opening sequence, so that the sounds aren't so echoey.
We were given advice to make our transitions smoother to link the shots together better, however the shots are supposed to be quite jerky, canted and rough.
We also have to make sure it’s all in black and white as parts of our sequence have not been edited in black and white yet.
It has also been pointed out that the black transitions last too long and should be filled to help make the story line understandable and to give something more to look at in the sequence.
Finally, we were given some advice to make our sound effects a bit more realistic such as the gun shots.